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I like your repetition of the word “chatter” – it creates a sense of listening, hearing, losing, listening again…lovely. Reply
I love the feeling of not being entirely sure on who its addressed to.. an ethereal being… a wind. Reply
There are people who hear voices. I imagine they might consider the voices they hear chatter. Others hear the chatter in their minds. Reply
One of the things I like about this is your creative choice of verbs like chatter, whoosing, mingling, prying–all active that makes the moment live. Reply
emangarduque 
I like your repetition of the word “chatter” – it creates a sense of listening, hearing, losing, listening again…lovely.
and I like the contrast with ‘silent as prying’
I love the feeling of not being entirely sure on who its addressed to.. an ethereal being… a wind.
There are people who hear voices. I imagine they might consider the voices they hear chatter. Others hear the chatter in their minds.
Love the sounds here—the chatter, breezing, whooshing ~
thx 🙂
One of the things I like about this is your creative choice of verbs like chatter, whoosing, mingling, prying–all active that makes the moment live.
I like this–I love nature and your poem speaks to me of the “chatter of nature.”