Love, Poem Love (18) for someone dear to me. ❤ Link to dVerse pub Poetics Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related Published by emangarduque View all posts by emangarduque
Nice drunken love poem. I especially liked the message about being able to drink rum all night, but not able to “unlove you tonight”. Reply
I like the way the mind wanders under the influence in this poem and the passion of never unloving the one you love. Reply
“I can’t unlove you tonight” … rooted in pain, marinated in rum. Bravo. It would make such a lovely song lyric. Reply
“I can’t unlove you tonight” So much in those few words. Ah….I just noticed others have quoted this line too….well, there you go. Just shows the power in those few words! 🙂 Reply
emangarduque 
You’ve channelled a little of Cummings here, one of my favorites. Awesomeness.
thank you!!
Aww. The moon always listens. So let’s go ahead. Cry and sigh. 🙂
Yes, you can always lean to the moon 🙂
Love the drunkenness in this… unlove does not exist
Nice.
Nothing wrong with a drunken love poem and crying to the moon.
Yes 🙂
Nice drunken love poem. I especially liked the message about being able to drink rum all night, but not able to “unlove you tonight”.
A clever poem.
I like the way the mind wanders under the influence in this poem and the passion of never unloving the one you love.
passionately drunk and in love at the same time. 🙂
“I can’t unlove you tonight” … rooted in pain, marinated in rum. Bravo. It would make such a lovely song lyric.
wow! thank you.
“I can’t unlove you tonight.” Wow! That line really clobbered me. Wonderful writing.
“I can’t unlove you tonight”
So much in those few words. Ah….I just noticed others have quoted this line too….well, there you go. Just shows the power in those few words! 🙂